Comments on: Three Printable Children’s Stories

By: benj

benj — Thu, 29 Dec 2011 15:29:38 +0000

These three children stories are good. I compare to each one and found one lesson ” to obey ” . The Bible says “Honor your father and your mother, that your days may be long upon the land which the Lord your God is giving you”. It’s not only to give honor to our parents that we may receive a promise or blessing through them , they are only the channel of God who transmitted that promise and blessing. That is why by honoring our parents we obey God for it is not there parent law but of God. The first story : Grandma’s tea cup that broke and glued illustrates our lives that even we’ve sin and always do sinning against God if we admit and confessed heartily He is always there to forgive our sins and be whole. Just leaning on His everlasting arms our clothes will be as white as snow we don’t see any spot or wrinkle .The second story is illustrating that when we saw a sign we must conform and obey or else we’ll be mess up. God give us ten wonderful do and dont’s , of these signs no one will led you out of the way and nobody will lost . They sign ” don’t swim” preventing everyone not to do so , because I believe the one who put that sign thinks something bad will happen if they do. The third , sometimes we cannot always watch our children even when we warn them not to do certain things that we knew is not good for them but children insist. We are all sons and daughters of God, although we knew God but sometimes we neglect to do things that is right at the end we are sorry for what we’d done. Once we realize our wrongdoing then we felt pity and seek the forgiveness of our parents and of God. I love these stories keep writing and God Bless Sister

By: Valerie

Valerie — Tue, 13 Dec 2011 13:22:15 +0000

I used the Grandma’s Tea Cup story to illustrate that when we disobey God we can mess up our lives, but God continues to love us and will put our lives back together again just like Grandma glued the teacup back together. I conclude by saying that though you may still be able to see the cracks in Grandma’s tea cup, as we learn to trust Jesus He can put our lives together so that the cracks don’t even show.

By: Bronwen Scott

Bronwen Scott — Mon, 17 Oct 2011 21:27:47 +0000

Thanks for a great website, it is very generous of you to share your stories and ideas.

By: Doc Wilson

Doc Wilson — Wed, 12 Oct 2011 14:37:00 +0000

That was a good story about the teacup. I will use it in one of my child stories.

By: Eliana

Eliana — Fri, 16 Sep 2011 08:42:07 +0000

very nice stories that could be used as illustrations in a bible lesson for kids, thanks

By: Jason

Jason — Fri, 02 Sep 2011 21:14:31 +0000

Thanks for the story Bonnie. I plan to use it this coming Sunday for the children.

Regards,
Jason

By: Bonnie Lucas

Bonnie Lucas — Fri, 29 Jan 2010 18:54:55 +0000

Cheyenne, thank you for your feedback. As I am new at this, your comments are very helpful. I lost track of this and am anxious to revise and continue to write for the Lord. Thanks again for the excellent idea!

By: Bonnie Lucas

Bonnie Lucas — Fri, 29 Jan 2010 18:52:39 +0000

Laura, Thank you for your reply and suggestions. I look forward to revising this story. This was the second story I wrote, so the process is very new to me. I will definitely use your suggestions.

By: Bonnie Lucas

Bonnie Lucas — Fri, 29 Jan 2010 18:50:49 +0000

Hi Jody! Thank you for the response. I’m so sorry it has been so long for me reply! I didn’t get many responses at first and kind of lost track of this. If you receive this please let me know if you used the story and how it went. I’ve been struggly with whether to continue to write. These 3 stories were my first three and just wanted to see how they were received. They weren’t meant to be lessons, per se, at first. I look forward to hearing from you.

By: Cheyene Sims

Cheyene Sims — Wed, 27 Jan 2010 15:42:42 +0000

I enjoyed Bonnie Lucas’ story about Grandma’s teacups. It was very realistic and it had a probable real ending. It is what I call a good life skills story, useful in Sunday School and to encourage discussion during youth group sessions planned around dialogue. But it will not be remembered long by today’s children who are accustomed to video games and lots of animation. To “update” what is a good story, may I suggest you put it into book video format. Add the main words to a powerpoint presentation having a picture background and include voice narration. It can be burned on to a CD/DVD or uploaded to video sites. Keep writing life skills stories.